Your words are like soft butterflies

With razor blade wings

Fluttering around me

Cutting as I scream

This beautiful anomaly

That causes so much pain

Holding me together…..

Keeping me sane

My mind is a labyrinth

Of the things I want and need

Words spoken on a whisper

Could bring me to my knees

I stare at your picture

That hangs within my mind

Images of our life together

That hasn’t come in time

The smallest gesture

Could bring hope to this weary soul

My feet pained from the travel

My heart tired and sore

Your words are a revival

Wiping the sleep from within my eyes

I’m clinging to these moments

Because they’re what’s making me feel alive.

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Great! scotxero (75.111.58.xxx) 2008-07-22 19:16:21 I know..I know..after so much praise I give over and over you probably think I'm full of shit by now but I really really like this one especially. It's sublime!

Well spoken... MrsEmarie 2008-07-26 09:03:11 this demonstrates a good knowledge of metaphoric imagery and as you say a beautiful anomaly... nicely done!

xxTainteDxx 2008-08-24 23:18:19 WwoowW!!!! - I like this one alot - Definitly hit many buttons over here.

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